Picayune?
Yeah, probably.
But your writing will be cleaner, stronger, more warmly received if you align your numbers.
- He finished with 104 tackles, four sacks, a forced fumble, interception, and four passes defended.
If your series includes numbers of items, you need a number to appear with each item.
- He finished with 104 tackles, four sacks, a forced fumble, an interception, and four passes defended.
There now. Don’t you feel better?
